I have been reviewing some applications for a position of late. I have found that several of the applicants are lacking in presenting a strong statement of purpose or SOP. Though this may be good advice for any position anywhere, and might be useful for anyone, I am specifically writing this for students who are from what we usually refer to as local engineering colleges in India and are aspiring to apply to a masters programs outside India, or to research positions in India or abroad. I am not an expert in writing SOPs, but I can do my best to give an insight into what one might be looking for in a good SOP.
While evaluating an SOP is subjective, there are some things that make for a stronger case in general. Since I have a technical background, mostly applicable to Engineering / Physics, I will draw heavily from my experiences in writing and reading SOPs in this area. For SOPs that are of a broader scope, such as arts, literature, social sciences, etc.. I’ll try to reach out to colleagues, friends, and the internet to do a more thorough job in the future. For now however, I hope to convey the spirit of the SOP in this post.
Here goes.
First of all an SOP is not:
- A wordy version of your resume / CV. (Note: CV/resume are not the same, more on this on a different post. For the purpose of this post, I will use them interchangeably.)
- A covering letter
- A full length document of your dreams and aspirations
- A single line stating you think you are a good candidate for the job / program (yes, I have seen such SOPs)
What goes on an SOP?
A statement of purpose is your chance to convey everything that you cannot convey in your resume, that are relevant to the application. Your marks might not reflect your true potential, this is your chance to show that you can bring a lot to the position. While your CV/resume reflects only the destination, the SOP can show your journey.
Here are some pointers:
1.Write an SOP!
If your application calls for an SOP, and you think you might cut it to the next stage of review / screening process just on the basis of your GPA / scores / grades, you are wrong. Your application will not make the cut, if it doesn’t carry all the required materials, including your SOP. So step 1, write your SOP and turn it in with the rest of your complete application.
2. Be Genuine
We are constantly surrounded by young overachievers. Peers or even pre-teens who have had life changing experiences and have gone on to great things, to change the world. Yes, they are an inspiration and if you are one of them, you have wonderful things to say on your SOP! But if you are a curious young person, who is just trying to figure out what’s next like most of us (I count my self as a curious young person, irrespective of when you are reading this!), that’s perfectly okay. It’s more than okay! Be genuine about what you want to say. Don’t lie, don’t embellish too much. If you are someone who has managed to get the basic education as far as you have, and aspire to take it further with YOUR life experiences (whatever they might be), you have a worthy story to tell. I am someone who did not have tremendously enlightening life changing experiences when I was applying to places. I had met with and talked to some scientists who really did inspire me, but it was a combination of luck, hard work, and personal + professional circumstances that led me to the path I am on today. So if you have not had some life altering experience before the age of say 18 or 21 like most of us, that’s okay! Be genuine about why you want to do what you want to do.
3. Pick a few important points to convey
It’s nice to read about your childhood and your aspirations. Sure, your story is unique to you and by all means you have every right to say your piece to motivate the reviewer in favour of your application. That being said, even if you are going for pulling at heart-strings make sure you focus on one or two central experiences that are relevant to the position you are applying for. Did you see or experience something that motivated you to take up the field? What excites you about the work you are seeking to do, or the subjects you want to study? What have you done in the past that reflects your keen interest in the area? Dig deep, find a couple of central points and weave your SOP around them. Bring it back home to why all this ties into what you are applying for / seeking to do next.
4. Go the extra mile
The thing that distinguishes an applicant with an SOP compared to others is that you have more to say and show than what is on your CV, which is likely very comparable to everyone else applying for the same position. Everyone who is applying, likely meets the same eligibility criteria. Has similar good scores, has studied similar courses. What goes on the SOP distinguishes you. Make sure you go the extra mile to stand out. If you are reading this even a few months in advance of the application due date, and find you have less to show on your SOP, be proactive in seeking out internship opportunities or projects with professors. They matter.
5. Do the work
Let’s say you are seeking to prepare a strong application due a few months down the line. If you have not worked on projects / internships that will make your case stronger, start now! There truly is nothing more valuable than having genuine content to write about. Do the work. Take up a project with a professor. Go get an internship in the industry. Do what it takes so you have enough to write about, genuinely. In the end, the difference between a candidate who has done the work and one who is all fluff, is evident.
- Focus on work experience
This is your chance to describe the projects you have worked on. On your CV/ resume you will list out a sentence bearing a title of your final year engineering project, where you worked on the project and who with (assuming engineering is your background, for others insert relevant project here). On your SOP, elaborate on this one sentence. What did you do? Where can this be applied? What software / hardware did you use? Which programming skills came in handy? Draw inspiration for your content and writing from remembering what the learning curve was like and if you had more time to continue working on the project what do you think you can do better, what new levels can you take the project to?
- Do your research
Look up the website of the institute / department / lab you are applying to. Read up the work they do. Customize your application for each university / institute. You are applying here because you want to learn something / work on something / do something. So look up the work and say what it is about this work that excites you. This shows that (a) you care enough to do the research (b) you know what you are talking about!
- Proof read
I know that many students worry about their command over the English language. It’s a valid concern especially when applying to programs in English speaking countries. For positions in India, try to get in touch with the contact on the advertisement to enquire if they will accept the SOP in a vernacular language (they might say yes and surprise you, what’s the harm in trying!). Assuming you are writing your SOP in English, whether or not you are worried about the grammar, get your friends, family, teachers, and mentors to proof read your application and give you critical comments. Use this feedback to improve your application.
- Look up for resources online
What do you do when you don’t know something? You look it up (thanks Google!). Here are a few I found just on a quick google search, and there are plenty more.. So go read more from professionals about what they have to say on the matter and use what is relevant to you.
- https://crunchprep.com/gre/2014/powerful-statement-of-purpose
- https://www.essayedge.com/blog/statement-of-purpose-format/
- https://www.thehindu.com/features/education/college-and-university/How-to-write-a-successful-SOP/article13990359.ece
- https://www.gograd.org/resources/grad-school-statement-of-purpose/
These are just some points I put together. I’ll add on more in future posts as they come to me. I hope some of these are helpful, and I hope that you are able to go on and do amazing things with your life, because you deserve it!